| Message ID | 20220501102706.30474-1-toertel@gmail.com |
|---|---|
| State | Accepted |
| Headers | show |
| Series | doc: Clarify opening sentences of overview | expand |
On 01.05.22 12:27, toertel@gmail.com wrote: > From: Mark Jonas <toertel@gmail.com> > > Proposed-by: Matthew Dews > Signed-off-by: Mark Jonas <toertel@gmail.com> > --- > doc/source/overview.rst | 10 +++++----- > 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) > > diff --git a/doc/source/overview.rst b/doc/source/overview.rst > index 6c72893..805887b 100644 > --- a/doc/source/overview.rst > +++ b/doc/source/overview.rst > @@ -5,11 +5,11 @@ > Software Management on embedded systems > ======================================= > > -Embedded Systems become more and more complex, > -and their software reflects the augmented complexity. > -New features and fixes let much more as desirable that > -the software on an embedded system can be updated > -in an absolutely reliable way. > +As Embedded Systems become more and more complex, > +their software reflects the augmented complexity. > +It is vital that the software on an embedded system > +can be updated in an absolutely reliable way, as > +new features and fixes are added. > > On a Linux-based system, we can find in most cases > the following elements: Applied to -master, thanks ! Best regards, Stefano Babic
diff --git a/doc/source/overview.rst b/doc/source/overview.rst index 6c72893..805887b 100644 --- a/doc/source/overview.rst +++ b/doc/source/overview.rst @@ -5,11 +5,11 @@ Software Management on embedded systems ======================================= -Embedded Systems become more and more complex, -and their software reflects the augmented complexity. -New features and fixes let much more as desirable that -the software on an embedded system can be updated -in an absolutely reliable way. +As Embedded Systems become more and more complex, +their software reflects the augmented complexity. +It is vital that the software on an embedded system +can be updated in an absolutely reliable way, as +new features and fixes are added. On a Linux-based system, we can find in most cases the following elements: