From patchwork Fri Mar 22 13:51:15 2024 Content-Type: text/plain; charset="utf-8" MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit X-Patchwork-Submitter: Markus Armbruster X-Patchwork-Id: 1914937 Return-Path: X-Original-To: incoming@patchwork.ozlabs.org Delivered-To: patchwork-incoming@legolas.ozlabs.org Authentication-Results: legolas.ozlabs.org; dkim=pass (1024-bit key; unprotected) header.d=redhat.com header.i=@redhat.com header.a=rsa-sha256 header.s=mimecast20190719 header.b=WYjCebqV; dkim-atps=neutral Authentication-Results: legolas.ozlabs.org; spf=pass (sender SPF authorized) smtp.mailfrom=nongnu.org (client-ip=209.51.188.17; helo=lists.gnu.org; envelope-from=qemu-devel-bounces+incoming=patchwork.ozlabs.org@nongnu.org; receiver=patchwork.ozlabs.org) Received: from lists.gnu.org (lists.gnu.org [209.51.188.17]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-ECDSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by legolas.ozlabs.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 4V1Nzz2f9Mz23r9 for ; Sat, 23 Mar 2024 00:52:15 +1100 (AEDT) Received: from localhost ([::1] helo=lists1p.gnu.org) by lists.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.90_1) (envelope-from ) id 1rnfJ9-0004yn-Pg; Fri, 22 Mar 2024 09:51:43 -0400 Received: from eggs.gnu.org ([2001:470:142:3::10]) by lists.gnu.org with esmtps (TLS1.2:ECDHE_RSA_AES_256_GCM_SHA384:256) (Exim 4.90_1) (envelope-from ) id 1rnfJ8-0004yf-N5 for qemu-devel@nongnu.org; Fri, 22 Mar 2024 09:51:42 -0400 Received: from us-smtp-delivery-124.mimecast.com ([170.10.133.124]) by eggs.gnu.org with esmtps (TLS1.2:ECDHE_RSA_AES_256_GCM_SHA384:256) (Exim 4.90_1) (envelope-from ) id 1rnfJ6-0007l4-Sv for qemu-devel@nongnu.org; Fri, 22 Mar 2024 09:51:42 -0400 DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=redhat.com; s=mimecast20190719; t=1711115500; h=from:from:reply-to:subject:subject:date:date:message-id:message-id: to:to:cc:cc:mime-version:mime-version:content-type:content-type: content-transfer-encoding:content-transfer-encoding: in-reply-to:in-reply-to:references:references; bh=HE1/LAbBgKNGZUN4vVfwfMG2XgQCV3fyiLC2K6eI99Q=; b=WYjCebqV8yFbB618yR/oFWmcPGJ5prrsX1Uqz69irzzjNInJlwtvLzZsLIz9n3eB6f5aO7 0SBhHijQTio5F2+xDfcAqQ3XhZQ3TLr1IhqPEXyIqYdbcesAne8JZ3zI0Qu72dgujNtkrt mmqj+gYoak5XfuZuwTdBCRUqkS5nrJs= Received: from mimecast-mx02.redhat.com (mimecast-mx02.redhat.com [66.187.233.88]) by relay.mimecast.com with ESMTP with STARTTLS (version=TLSv1.3, cipher=TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384) id us-mta-438-PHdL2ihnNOqjEDv1gbHG8g-1; Fri, 22 Mar 2024 09:51:38 -0400 X-MC-Unique: PHdL2ihnNOqjEDv1gbHG8g-1 Received: from smtp.corp.redhat.com (int-mx01.intmail.prod.int.rdu2.redhat.com [10.11.54.1]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (2048 bits) server-digest SHA256) (No client certificate requested) by mimecast-mx02.redhat.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 6B71285CBAC; Fri, 22 Mar 2024 13:51:38 +0000 (UTC) Received: from blackfin.pond.sub.org (unknown [10.39.192.81]) by smtp.corp.redhat.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 2FBCC3C54; Fri, 22 Mar 2024 13:51:38 +0000 (UTC) Received: by blackfin.pond.sub.org (Postfix, from userid 1000) id 1124E21E5D27; Fri, 22 Mar 2024 14:51:17 +0100 (CET) From: Markus Armbruster To: qemu-devel@nongnu.org Cc: peterx@redhat.com, farosas@suse.de, eblake@redhat.com, berrange@redhat.com Subject: [PATCH 1/3] qapi: Improve migration TLS documentation Date: Fri, 22 Mar 2024 14:51:15 +0100 Message-ID: <20240322135117.195489-2-armbru@redhat.com> In-Reply-To: <20240322135117.195489-1-armbru@redhat.com> References: <20240322135117.195489-1-armbru@redhat.com> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-type: text/plain X-Scanned-By: MIMEDefang 3.4.1 on 10.11.54.1 Received-SPF: pass client-ip=170.10.133.124; envelope-from=armbru@redhat.com; helo=us-smtp-delivery-124.mimecast.com X-Spam_score_int: -22 X-Spam_score: -2.3 X-Spam_bar: -- X-Spam_report: (-2.3 / 5.0 requ) BAYES_00=-1.9, DKIMWL_WL_HIGH=-0.222, DKIM_SIGNED=0.1, DKIM_VALID=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_AU=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_EF=-0.1, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_NONE=-0.0001, RCVD_IN_MSPIKE_H4=0.001, RCVD_IN_MSPIKE_WL=0.001, SPF_HELO_NONE=0.001, SPF_PASS=-0.001 autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no X-Spam_action: no action X-BeenThere: qemu-devel@nongnu.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.29 Precedence: list List-Id: List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , Errors-To: qemu-devel-bounces+incoming=patchwork.ozlabs.org@nongnu.org Sender: qemu-devel-bounces+incoming=patchwork.ozlabs.org@nongnu.org MigrateSetParameters is about setting parameters, and MigrationParameters is about querying them. Their documentation of @tls-creds and @tls-hostname has residual damage from a failed attempt at de-duplicating them (see commit de63ab61241 "migrate: Share common MigrationParameters struct" and commit 1bda8b3c695 "migration: Unshare MigrationParameters struct for now"). MigrateSetParameters documentation issues: * It claims plain text mode "was reported by omitting tls-creds" before 2.9. MigrateSetParameters is not used for reporting, so this is misleading. Delete. * It similarly claims hostname defaulting to migration URI "was reported by omitting tls-hostname" before 2.9. Delete as well. Rephrase the remaining @tls-hostname contents for clarity. Enum MigrationParameter mirrors the members of struct MigrateSetParameters. Differences to MigrateSetParameters's member documentation are pointless. Copy the new text to MigrationParameter. MigrationParameters documentation issues: * @tls-creds runs the two last sentences together without punctuation. Fix that. * Much of the contents on @tls-hostname only applies to setting parameters, resulting in confusion. Replace by a suitable abridged version of the new MigrateSetParameters text, and a note on @tls-hostname omission in 2.8. Additional damage is due to flawed doc fix commit 66fcb9d651d (qapi/migration: Add missing tls-authz documentation): since it copied the missing MigrateSetParameters text from MigrationParameters instead of MigrationParameter, the part on recreating @tls-authz on the fly is missing. Copy that, too. Signed-off-by: Markus Armbruster --- qapi/migration.json | 63 +++++++++++++++++++++++---------------------- 1 file changed, 32 insertions(+), 31 deletions(-) diff --git a/qapi/migration.json b/qapi/migration.json index aa1b39bce1..cbcc6946eb 100644 --- a/qapi/migration.json +++ b/qapi/migration.json @@ -809,16 +809,19 @@ # for establishing a TLS connection over the migration data # channel. On the outgoing side of the migration, the credentials # must be for a 'client' endpoint, while for the incoming side the -# credentials must be for a 'server' endpoint. Setting this will -# enable TLS for all migrations. The default is unset, resulting -# in unsecured migration at the QEMU level. (Since 2.7) +# credentials must be for a 'server' endpoint. Setting this to a +# non-empty string enables TLS for all migrations. An empty +# string means that QEMU will use plain text mode for migration, +# rather than TLS. (Since 2.7) # -# @tls-hostname: hostname of the target host for the migration. This -# is required when using x509 based TLS credentials and the -# migration URI does not already include a hostname. For example -# if using fd: or exec: based migration, the hostname must be -# provided so that the server's x509 certificate identity can be -# validated. (Since 2.7) +# @tls-hostname: migration target's hostname for validating the +# server's x509 certificate identify. If empty, QEMU will use the +# hostname from the migration URI, if any. A non-empty value is +# required when using x509 based TLS credentials and the migration +# URI does not include a hostname, such as fd: or exec: based +# migration. (Since 2.7) +# +# Note: empty value works only since 2.9. # # @tls-authz: ID of the 'authz' object subclass that provides access # control checking of the TLS x509 certificate distinguished name. @@ -1006,22 +1009,22 @@ # credentials must be for a 'server' endpoint. Setting this to a # non-empty string enables TLS for all migrations. An empty # string means that QEMU will use plain text mode for migration, -# rather than TLS (Since 2.9) Previously (since 2.7), this was -# reported by omitting tls-creds instead. +# rather than TLS. This is the default. (Since 2.7) # -# @tls-hostname: hostname of the target host for the migration. This -# is required when using x509 based TLS credentials and the -# migration URI does not already include a hostname. For example -# if using fd: or exec: based migration, the hostname must be -# provided so that the server's x509 certificate identity can be -# validated. (Since 2.7) An empty string means that QEMU will use -# the hostname associated with the migration URI, if any. (Since -# 2.9) Previously (since 2.7), this was reported by omitting -# tls-hostname instead. +# @tls-hostname: migration target's hostname for validating the +# server's x509 certificate identify. If empty, QEMU will use the +# hostname from the migration URI, if any. A non-empty value is +# required when using x509 based TLS credentials and the migration +# URI does not include a hostname, such as fd: or exec: based +# migration. (Since 2.7) +# +# Note: empty value works only since 2.9. # # @tls-authz: ID of the 'authz' object subclass that provides access # control checking of the TLS x509 certificate distinguished name. -# (Since 4.0) +# This object is only resolved at time of use, so can be deleted +# and recreated on the fly while the migration server is active. +# If missing, it will default to denying access (Since 4.0) # # @max-bandwidth: to set maximum speed for migration. maximum speed # in bytes per second. (Since 2.8) @@ -1240,17 +1243,15 @@ # must be for a 'client' endpoint, while for the incoming side the # credentials must be for a 'server' endpoint. An empty string # means that QEMU will use plain text mode for migration, rather -# than TLS (Since 2.7) Note: 2.8 reports this by omitting -# tls-creds instead. +# than TLS. (Since 2.7) # -# @tls-hostname: hostname of the target host for the migration. This -# is required when using x509 based TLS credentials and the -# migration URI does not already include a hostname. For example -# if using fd: or exec: based migration, the hostname must be -# provided so that the server's x509 certificate identity can be -# validated. (Since 2.7) An empty string means that QEMU will use -# the hostname associated with the migration URI, if any. (Since -# 2.9) Note: 2.8 reports this by omitting tls-hostname instead. +# Note: 2.8 omits empty @tls-creds instead. +# +# @tls-hostname: migration target's hostname for validating the +# server's x509 certificate identify. If empty, QEMU will use the +# hostname from the migration URI, if any. (Since 2.7) +# +# Note: 2.8 omits empty @tls-hostname instead. # # @tls-authz: ID of the 'authz' object subclass that provides access # control checking of the TLS x509 certificate distinguished name.