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[6/7] process.rst: Perform minor cleanups

Message ID 20220711171439.1657280-6-trini@konsulko.com
State Superseded
Delegated to: Heinrich Schuchardt
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Series [1/7] doc: Migrate CodingStyle wiki page to Sphinx | expand

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Tom Rini July 11, 2022, 5:14 p.m. UTC
- Use gender-neutral language to refer to the user, consistently.
- Reword a few places so that they read more naturally.
- Make the long standing practice around "Twilight Time" more clear,
  hopefully.
- Replace a reference to MAKEALL with a reference to CI testing as
  that's the current requirement.

Cc: Claudius Heine <ch@denx.de>
Cc: Martin Bonner <martingreybeard@gmail.com>
Cc: Heinrich Schuchardt <xypron.glpk@gmx.de>
Signed-off-by: Tom Rini <trini@konsulko.com>
---
Changes in v2:
- Further tweak the wording, per Martin
---
 doc/develop/process.rst | 33 +++++++++++++++++----------------
 1 file changed, 17 insertions(+), 16 deletions(-)

Comments

Heinrich Schuchardt July 13, 2022, 5:43 p.m. UTC | #1
On 7/11/22 19:14, Tom Rini wrote:
> - Use gender-neutral language to refer to the user, consistently.
> - Reword a few places so that they read more naturally.
> - Make the long standing practice around "Twilight Time" more clear,
>    hopefully.
> - Replace a reference to MAKEALL with a reference to CI testing as
>    that's the current requirement.
>
> Cc: Claudius Heine <ch@denx.de>
> Cc: Martin Bonner <martingreybeard@gmail.com>
> Cc: Heinrich Schuchardt <xypron.glpk@gmx.de>
> Signed-off-by: Tom Rini <trini@konsulko.com>
> ---
> Changes in v2:
> - Further tweak the wording, per Martin
> ---
>   doc/develop/process.rst | 33 +++++++++++++++++----------------
>   1 file changed, 17 insertions(+), 16 deletions(-)
>
> diff --git a/doc/develop/process.rst b/doc/develop/process.rst
> index 534da4a2a704..d0c46b58f3e9 100644
> --- a/doc/develop/process.rst
> +++ b/doc/develop/process.rst
> @@ -46,21 +46,22 @@ Twilight Time
>   -------------
>
>   Usually patches do not get accepted as they are - the peer review that takes
> -place will usually require changes and resubmits of the patches before they
> +place will usually require changes and resubmissions of the patches before they
>   are considered to be ripe for inclusion into mainline.
>
> -Also, the review often happens not immediately after a patch was submitted,
> +Also the review often happens not immediately after a patch was submitted,
>   but only when somebody (usually the responsible custodian) finds time to do
>   this.
>
> -In the result, the final version of such patches gets submitted after the
> +The result is that the final version of such patches gets submitted after the
>   merge window has been closed.
>
>   It is current practice in U-Boot that such patches are eligible to go into the
>   upcoming release.
>
> -In the result, the release of the ``"-rc1"`` version does not immediately follow
> -the closing of the Merge Window.
> +The result is that the release of the ``"-rc1"`` version and formal closing of
> +the Merge Window does not preclude patches that were already posted from being
> +merged for the upcoming release.
>
>   Stabilization Period
>   --------------------
> @@ -75,13 +76,13 @@ Sometimes it is not clear if a patch contains a bug fix or not.
>   For example, changes that remove dead code, unused macros etc. or
>   that contain Coding Style fixes are not strict bug fixes.
>
> -In such situations it is up to the responsible custodian to decide if he
> -applies such patches even when the Merge Window is closed.
> +In such situations it is up to the responsible custodian to decide if they

The custodian is singular.

> +apply such patches even when the Merge Window is closed.
>
>   Exception: at the end of the Stabilization Period only strict bug
>   fixes my be applied.
>
> -Sometimes patches miss the the Merge Window slightly - say by few
> +Sometimes patches miss the Merge Window slightly - say by a few
>   hours or even a day. Patch acceptance is not as critical as a
>   financial transaction, or such. So if there is such a slight delay,
>   the custodian is free to turn a blind eye and accept it anyway. The
> @@ -110,7 +111,7 @@ Custodians
>   ----------
>
>   The Custodians take responsibility for some area of the U-Boot code.  The
> -in-tree ``MAINTAINERS`` files list who is reponsible for which areas.
> +in-tree ``MAINTAINERS`` files list who is responsible for which areas.
>
>   It is their responsibility to pick up patches from the mailing list
>   that fall into their responsibility, and to process these.
> @@ -155,7 +156,7 @@ like this:
>
>      #. Applies cleanly to the source tree
>
> -   #. passes a ``MAKEALL`` compile test without creating new warnings
> +   #. Passes :doc:`ci_testing` as this checks for new warnings and other issues.

%s/ci/CI/

>
>   #. Notes:
>
> @@ -167,7 +168,7 @@ like this:
>
>     #. This is well documented in :doc:`designprinciples`.
>
> -  #. The custodian decides himself how recent the code must be.  It is
> +  #. The custodian decides themselves how recent the code must be.  It is

The custodian is singular.

>        acceptable to request patches against the last officially released
>        version of U-Boot or newer.  Of course a custodian can also accept
>        patches against older code.
> @@ -177,7 +178,7 @@ like this:
>
>   #. The custodian decides to accept or to reject the patch.
>
> -#. If accepted, the custodian adds the patch to his public git repository and
> +#. If accepted, the custodian adds the patch to their public git repository and
>      notifies the mailing list. This note should include:
>
>      * a short description of the changes
> @@ -186,15 +187,15 @@ like this:
>
>      * suggested tests
>
> -   Although the custodian is supposed to perform his own tests
> -   it is a well-known and accepted fact that he needs help from
> +   Although the custodian is supposed to perform their own tests

ditto

> +   it is a well-known and accepted fact that they needs help from
>      other developers who - for example - have access to the required
>      hardware or tool chains.
>      The custodian request help for tests and feedback from
>      specific maintainers and U-Boot users.
>
>   #. Once tests are passed, some agreed time limit expires, the custodian
> -   requests that the changes in his public git repository be merged into the
> -   main tree. If necessary, the custodian may have to adapt his changes to
> +   requests that the changes in their public git repository be merged into the
> +   main tree. If necessary, the custodian may have to adapt their changes to

ditto

Best regards

Heinrich

>      allow for a clean merge.
>      Todo: define a reasonable time limit. 3 weeks?
Tom Rini July 13, 2022, 5:58 p.m. UTC | #2
On Wed, Jul 13, 2022 at 07:43:25PM +0200, Heinrich Schuchardt wrote:
> On 7/11/22 19:14, Tom Rini wrote:
[snip]
> > @@ -155,7 +156,7 @@ like this:
> > 
> >      #. Applies cleanly to the source tree
> > 
> > -   #. passes a ``MAKEALL`` compile test without creating new warnings
> > +   #. Passes :doc:`ci_testing` as this checks for new warnings and other issues.
> 
> %s/ci/CI/

No?  This is a reference so it renders using the document title.
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diff --git a/doc/develop/process.rst b/doc/develop/process.rst
index 534da4a2a704..d0c46b58f3e9 100644
--- a/doc/develop/process.rst
+++ b/doc/develop/process.rst
@@ -46,21 +46,22 @@  Twilight Time
 -------------
 
 Usually patches do not get accepted as they are - the peer review that takes
-place will usually require changes and resubmits of the patches before they
+place will usually require changes and resubmissions of the patches before they
 are considered to be ripe for inclusion into mainline.
 
-Also, the review often happens not immediately after a patch was submitted,
+Also the review often happens not immediately after a patch was submitted,
 but only when somebody (usually the responsible custodian) finds time to do
 this.
 
-In the result, the final version of such patches gets submitted after the
+The result is that the final version of such patches gets submitted after the
 merge window has been closed.
 
 It is current practice in U-Boot that such patches are eligible to go into the
 upcoming release.
 
-In the result, the release of the ``"-rc1"`` version does not immediately follow
-the closing of the Merge Window.
+The result is that the release of the ``"-rc1"`` version and formal closing of
+the Merge Window does not preclude patches that were already posted from being
+merged for the upcoming release.
 
 Stabilization Period
 --------------------
@@ -75,13 +76,13 @@  Sometimes it is not clear if a patch contains a bug fix or not.
 For example, changes that remove dead code, unused macros etc. or
 that contain Coding Style fixes are not strict bug fixes.
 
-In such situations it is up to the responsible custodian to decide if he
-applies such patches even when the Merge Window is closed.
+In such situations it is up to the responsible custodian to decide if they
+apply such patches even when the Merge Window is closed.
 
 Exception: at the end of the Stabilization Period only strict bug
 fixes my be applied.
 
-Sometimes patches miss the the Merge Window slightly - say by few
+Sometimes patches miss the Merge Window slightly - say by a few
 hours or even a day. Patch acceptance is not as critical as a
 financial transaction, or such. So if there is such a slight delay,
 the custodian is free to turn a blind eye and accept it anyway. The
@@ -110,7 +111,7 @@  Custodians
 ----------
 
 The Custodians take responsibility for some area of the U-Boot code.  The
-in-tree ``MAINTAINERS`` files list who is reponsible for which areas.
+in-tree ``MAINTAINERS`` files list who is responsible for which areas.
 
 It is their responsibility to pick up patches from the mailing list
 that fall into their responsibility, and to process these.
@@ -155,7 +156,7 @@  like this:
 
    #. Applies cleanly to the source tree
 
-   #. passes a ``MAKEALL`` compile test without creating new warnings
+   #. Passes :doc:`ci_testing` as this checks for new warnings and other issues.
 
 #. Notes:
 
@@ -167,7 +168,7 @@  like this:
 
   #. This is well documented in :doc:`designprinciples`.
 
-  #. The custodian decides himself how recent the code must be.  It is
+  #. The custodian decides themselves how recent the code must be.  It is
      acceptable to request patches against the last officially released
      version of U-Boot or newer.  Of course a custodian can also accept
      patches against older code.
@@ -177,7 +178,7 @@  like this:
 
 #. The custodian decides to accept or to reject the patch.
 
-#. If accepted, the custodian adds the patch to his public git repository and
+#. If accepted, the custodian adds the patch to their public git repository and
    notifies the mailing list. This note should include:
 
    * a short description of the changes
@@ -186,15 +187,15 @@  like this:
 
    * suggested tests
 
-   Although the custodian is supposed to perform his own tests
-   it is a well-known and accepted fact that he needs help from
+   Although the custodian is supposed to perform their own tests
+   it is a well-known and accepted fact that they needs help from
    other developers who - for example - have access to the required
    hardware or tool chains.
    The custodian request help for tests and feedback from
    specific maintainers and U-Boot users.
 
 #. Once tests are passed, some agreed time limit expires, the custodian
-   requests that the changes in his public git repository be merged into the
-   main tree. If necessary, the custodian may have to adapt his changes to
+   requests that the changes in their public git repository be merged into the
+   main tree. If necessary, the custodian may have to adapt their changes to
    allow for a clean merge.
    Todo: define a reasonable time limit. 3 weeks?