Patchwork Fix some wording in qemu.1

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Submitter Dan Church
Date April 17, 2011, 1:25 a.m.
Message ID <BANLkTimjvikEGQNdB2bhuWKZS6zAgdng8w@mail.gmail.com>
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Permalink /patch/91523/
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Dan Church - April 17, 2011, 1:25 a.m.
Yeah, sorry about that. I pressed 'p' in Vim in the wrong place.
Here's the final patch:

 .IP "\fBmedia=\fR\fImedia\fR" 4
 .IX Item "media=media"
@@ -376,10 +376,10 @@
 incremented:
 .Sp
 .Vb 1
-\&        qemu \-drive file=a \-drive file=b"
+\&        qemu \-drive file=a \-drive file=b
 .Ve
 .Sp
-is interpreted like:
+is interpreted as:
 .Sp
 .Vb 1
 \&        qemu \-hda a \-hdb b


On Sat, Apr 16, 2011 at 15:25, Stefan Weil <weil@mail.berlios.de> wrote:
> Am 16.04.2011 21:38, schrieb Dan Church:
>>
>> It was apparent that some parts of the man page were written by
>> non-native English speaker(s), so I figured I'd help out somewhat:
>>
>> --- qemu/qemu.1.orig    2011-04-16 14:33:06.000000000 -0500
>> +++ qemu/qemu.1 2011-04-16 14:36:38.000000000 -0500
>> @@ -271,11 +271,11 @@
>>  Available types are: ide, scsi, sd, mtd, floppy, pflash, virtio.
>>  .IP "\fBbus=\fR\fIbus\fR\fB,unit=\fR\fIunit\fR" 4
>>  .IX Item "bus=bus,unit=unit"
>> -These options define where is connected the drive by defining the bus
>> number and
>> +These options define where the drive by is connected defining the bus
>> number and
>>
>
> ... where the drive is connected by defining ...? See also next change.
>
> The other changes look good.
>
>>  the unit id.
>>  .IP "\fBindex=\fR\fIindex\fR" 4
>>  .IX Item "index=index"
>> -This option defines where is connected the drive by using an index in the
>> list
>> +This option defines where the drive is connected by using an index in the
>> list
>>  of available connectors of a given interface type.
>>  .IP "\fBmedia=\fR\fImedia\fR" 4
>>  .IX Item "media=media"
>> @@ -376,10 +376,10 @@
>>  incremented:
>>  .Sp
>>  .Vb 1
>> -\&         qemu \-drive file=a \-drive file=b"
>> +\&         qemu \-drive file=a \-drive file=b
>>  .Ve
>>  .Sp
>> -is interpreted like:
>> +is interpreted as:
>>  .Sp
>>  .Vb 1
>>  \&         qemu \-hda a \-hdb b
>>
>>
>>
>
>
Stefan Weil - April 17, 2011, 5:54 a.m.
Am 17.04.2011 03:25, schrieb Dan Church:
> Yeah, sorry about that. I pressed 'p' in Vim in the wrong place.
> Here's the final patch:
>
> --- qemu/qemu.1.orig 2011-04-16 14:33:06.000000000 -0500
> +++ qemu/qemu.1 2011-04-16 14:56:56.000000000 -0500
> @@ -271,11 +271,11 @@
> Available types are: ide, scsi, sd, mtd, floppy, pflash, virtio.
> .IP "\fBbus=\fR\fIbus\fR\fB,unit=\fR\fIunit\fR" 4
> .IX Item "bus=bus,unit=unit"
> -These options define where is connected the drive by defining the bus
> number and
> +These options define where the drive is connected by defining the bus
> number and
> the unit id.
> .IP "\fBindex=\fR\fIindex\fR" 4
> .IX Item "index=index"
> -This option defines where is connected the drive by using an index in 
> the list
> +This option defines where the drive is connected by using an index in 
> the list
> of available connectors of a given interface type.
> .IP "\fBmedia=\fR\fImedia\fR" 4
> .IX Item "media=media"
> @@ -376,10 +376,10 @@
> incremented:
> .Sp
> .Vb 1
> -\& qemu \-drive file=a \-drive file=b"
> +\& qemu \-drive file=a \-drive file=b
> .Ve
> .Sp
> -is interpreted like:
> +is interpreted as:
> .Sp
> .Vb 1
> \& qemu \-hda a \-hdb b
>
>
> On Sat, Apr 16, 2011 at 15:25, Stefan Weil <weil@mail.berlios.de> wrote:
>> Am 16.04.2011 21:38, schrieb Dan Church:
>>>
>>> It was apparent that some parts of the man page were written by
>>> non-native English speaker(s), so I figured I'd help out somewhat:
>>>
>>> --- qemu/qemu.1.orig    2011-04-16 14:33:06.000000000 -0500
>>> +++ qemu/qemu.1 2011-04-16 14:36:38.000000000 -0500
>>> @@ -271,11 +271,11 @@
>>>  Available types are: ide, scsi, sd, mtd, floppy, pflash, virtio.
>>>  .IP "\fBbus=\fR\fIbus\fR\fB,unit=\fR\fIunit\fR" 4
>>>  .IX Item "bus=bus,unit=unit"
>>> -These options define where is connected the drive by defining the bus
>>> number and
>>> +These options define where the drive by is connected defining the bus
>>> number and
>>>
>>
>> ... where the drive is connected by defining ...? See also next change.
>>
>> The other changes look good.
>>
>>>  the unit id.
>>>  .IP "\fBindex=\fR\fIindex\fR" 4
>>>  .IX Item "index=index"
>>> -This option defines where is connected the drive by using an index 
>>> in the
>>> list
>>> +This option defines where the drive is connected by using an index 
>>> in the
>>> list
>>>  of available connectors of a given interface type.
>>>  .IP "\fBmedia=\fR\fImedia\fR" 4
>>>  .IX Item "media=media"
>>> @@ -376,10 +376,10 @@
>>>  incremented:
>>>  .Sp
>>>  .Vb 1
>>> -\&         qemu \-drive file=a \-drive file=b"
>>> +\&         qemu \-drive file=a \-drive file=b
>>>  .Ve
>>>  .Sp
>>> -is interpreted like:
>>> +is interpreted as:
>>>  .Sp
>>>  .Vb 1
>>>  \&         qemu \-hda a \-hdb b

Could you please add a "Signed-off-by" signature and send the patch with 
"git send-email"?

Thanks,
Stefan W.

Patch

--- qemu/qemu.1.orig	2011-04-16 14:33:06.000000000 -0500
+++ qemu/qemu.1	2011-04-16 14:56:56.000000000 -0500
@@ -271,11 +271,11 @@ 
 Available types are: ide, scsi, sd, mtd, floppy, pflash, virtio.
 .IP "\fBbus=\fR\fIbus\fR\fB,unit=\fR\fIunit\fR" 4
 .IX Item "bus=bus,unit=unit"
-These options define where is connected the drive by defining the bus
number and
+These options define where the drive is connected by defining the bus
number and
 the unit id.
 .IP "\fBindex=\fR\fIindex\fR" 4
 .IX Item "index=index"
-This option defines where is connected the drive by using an index in the list
+This option defines where the drive is connected by using an index in the list
 of available connectors of a given interface type.