Patchwork Fix some wording in qemu.1

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Submitter Dan Church
Date April 16, 2011, 7:38 p.m.
Message ID <BANLkTimOPWtCcONkiGcPHu8F0NtSB2_CWg@mail.gmail.com>
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Dan Church - April 16, 2011, 7:38 p.m.
It was apparent that some parts of the man page were written by
non-native English speaker(s), so I figured I'd help out somewhat:

 .IP "\fBmedia=\fR\fImedia\fR" 4
 .IX Item "media=media"
@@ -376,10 +376,10 @@
 incremented:
 .Sp
 .Vb 1
-\&        qemu \-drive file=a \-drive file=b"
+\&        qemu \-drive file=a \-drive file=b
 .Ve
 .Sp
-is interpreted like:
+is interpreted as:
 .Sp
 .Vb 1
 \&        qemu \-hda a \-hdb b
Stefan Weil - April 16, 2011, 8:25 p.m.
Am 16.04.2011 21:38, schrieb Dan Church:
> It was apparent that some parts of the man page were written by
> non-native English speaker(s), so I figured I'd help out somewhat:
>
> --- qemu/qemu.1.orig	2011-04-16 14:33:06.000000000 -0500
> +++ qemu/qemu.1	2011-04-16 14:36:38.000000000 -0500
> @@ -271,11 +271,11 @@
>   Available types are: ide, scsi, sd, mtd, floppy, pflash, virtio.
>   .IP "\fBbus=\fR\fIbus\fR\fB,unit=\fR\fIunit\fR" 4
>   .IX Item "bus=bus,unit=unit"
> -These options define where is connected the drive by defining the bus
> number and
> +These options define where the drive by is connected defining the bus
> number and
>    

... where the drive is connected by defining ...? See also next change.

The other changes look good.

>   the unit id.
>   .IP "\fBindex=\fR\fIindex\fR" 4
>   .IX Item "index=index"
> -This option defines where is connected the drive by using an index in the list
> +This option defines where the drive is connected by using an index in the list
>   of available connectors of a given interface type.
>   .IP "\fBmedia=\fR\fImedia\fR" 4
>   .IX Item "media=media"
> @@ -376,10 +376,10 @@
>   incremented:
>   .Sp
>   .Vb 1
> -\&         qemu \-drive file=a \-drive file=b"
> +\&         qemu \-drive file=a \-drive file=b
>   .Ve
>   .Sp
> -is interpreted like:
> +is interpreted as:
>   .Sp
>   .Vb 1
>   \&         qemu \-hda a \-hdb b
>
>
>

Patch

--- qemu/qemu.1.orig	2011-04-16 14:33:06.000000000 -0500
+++ qemu/qemu.1	2011-04-16 14:36:38.000000000 -0500
@@ -271,11 +271,11 @@ 
 Available types are: ide, scsi, sd, mtd, floppy, pflash, virtio.
 .IP "\fBbus=\fR\fIbus\fR\fB,unit=\fR\fIunit\fR" 4
 .IX Item "bus=bus,unit=unit"
-These options define where is connected the drive by defining the bus
number and
+These options define where the drive by is connected defining the bus
number and
 the unit id.
 .IP "\fBindex=\fR\fIindex\fR" 4
 .IX Item "index=index"
-This option defines where is connected the drive by using an index in the list
+This option defines where the drive is connected by using an index in the list
 of available connectors of a given interface type.