Patchwork [net-next,2/2] net: doc: add default value for neighbour parameters

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Submitter Shan Wei
Date Dec. 7, 2012, 2:27 a.m.
Message ID <50C15427.9060803@gmail.com>
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Permalink /patch/204379/
State Accepted
Delegated to: David Miller
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Shan Wei - Dec. 7, 2012, 2:27 a.m.
Ben Hutchings said, at 2012/12/7 4:20:
> 'Secluded' is a fine word but your dictionary should have said that it
> is used to describe places, not events.  You're quite right that this is
> not silent, though.  So a word like 'hidden', 'quiet', 'non-obvious' or
> 'unexpected' would be more appropriate.

You are right´╝îgood suggestion :-).
Thanks for your review.

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[PATCH net-next] net: doc : use more suitable word 'unexpected' to replace 'secluded'

 'secluded' is used to describe places, not suitable here.

Suggested-by: Ben Hutchings <bhutchings@solarflare.com>
Signed-off-by: Shan Wei <davidshan@tencent.com>
---
 Documentation/networking/ip-sysctl.txt |    2 +-
 1 files changed, 1 insertions(+), 1 deletions(-)
David Miller - Dec. 7, 2012, 7:31 p.m.
From: Shan Wei <shanwei88@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 07 Dec 2012 10:27:51 +0800

> [PATCH net-next] net: doc : use more suitable word 'unexpected' to replace 'secluded'
> 
>  'secluded' is used to describe places, not suitable here.
> 
> Suggested-by: Ben Hutchings <bhutchings@solarflare.com>
> Signed-off-by: Shan Wei <davidshan@tencent.com>

Applied.
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Patch

diff --git a/Documentation/networking/ip-sysctl.txt b/Documentation/networking/ip-sysctl.txt
index 0462a71..1b830ca 100644
--- a/Documentation/networking/ip-sysctl.txt
+++ b/Documentation/networking/ip-sysctl.txt
@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@  neigh/default/unres_qlen - INTEGER
 	unresolved address by other network layers.
 	(deprecated in linux 3.3) : use unres_qlen_bytes instead.
 	Prior to linux 3.3, the default value is 3 which may cause
-	secluded packet loss. The current default value is calculated
+	unexpected packet loss. The current default value is calculated
 	according to default value of unres_qlen_bytes and true size of
 	packet.
 	Default: 31