| Message ID | BANLkTimOPWtCcONkiGcPHu8F0NtSB2_CWg@mail.gmail.com |
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Am 16.04.2011 21:38, schrieb Dan Church: > It was apparent that some parts of the man page were written by > non-native English speaker(s), so I figured I'd help out somewhat: > > --- qemu/qemu.1.orig 2011-04-16 14:33:06.000000000 -0500 > +++ qemu/qemu.1 2011-04-16 14:36:38.000000000 -0500 > @@ -271,11 +271,11 @@ > Available types are: ide, scsi, sd, mtd, floppy, pflash, virtio. > .IP "\fBbus=\fR\fIbus\fR\fB,unit=\fR\fIunit\fR" 4 > .IX Item "bus=bus,unit=unit" > -These options define where is connected the drive by defining the bus > number and > +These options define where the drive by is connected defining the bus > number and > ... where the drive is connected by defining ...? See also next change. The other changes look good. > the unit id. > .IP "\fBindex=\fR\fIindex\fR" 4 > .IX Item "index=index" > -This option defines where is connected the drive by using an index in the list > +This option defines where the drive is connected by using an index in the list > of available connectors of a given interface type. > .IP "\fBmedia=\fR\fImedia\fR" 4 > .IX Item "media=media" > @@ -376,10 +376,10 @@ > incremented: > .Sp > .Vb 1 > -\& qemu \-drive file=a \-drive file=b" > +\& qemu \-drive file=a \-drive file=b > .Ve > .Sp > -is interpreted like: > +is interpreted as: > .Sp > .Vb 1 > \& qemu \-hda a \-hdb b > > >
--- qemu/qemu.1.orig 2011-04-16 14:33:06.000000000 -0500 +++ qemu/qemu.1 2011-04-16 14:36:38.000000000 -0500 @@ -271,11 +271,11 @@ Available types are: ide, scsi, sd, mtd, floppy, pflash, virtio. .IP "\fBbus=\fR\fIbus\fR\fB,unit=\fR\fIunit\fR" 4 .IX Item "bus=bus,unit=unit" -These options define where is connected the drive by defining the bus number and +These options define where the drive by is connected defining the bus number and the unit id. .IP "\fBindex=\fR\fIindex\fR" 4 .IX Item "index=index" -This option defines where is connected the drive by using an index in the list +This option defines where the drive is connected by using an index in the list of available connectors of a given interface type.